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SH 2 Rewrite - Oh look, trees.
*James is shown looking at himself in a restroom mirror. After staring at
himself for a short time he takes in a deep breath. He comments about
his great night of sleep.*
James: Wow... Could Mary REALLY be in this town?
*James walks outside of restroom and into the observation deck parking lot.
Mary's voice is then heard as James walks to the edge of the parking
lot that overlooks Silent hill. He coughs a little.*
Mary: In my restless dreams, I see that town.
You promised you'd take me there again someday,
But you never did.
Well I'm alone there now...
In our 'special place'...
Waiting for you...
James: I got a letter.
The name on the envelope said 'Mary.'
My hollow p
SH 2 Rewrite - Angeloooooo
*On his journey into town, James walks into graveyard where he sees a girl examining one of the graves and approaches her*
James: Excuse me, I...
*The girl steps back from grave and gasps in surprise*
Girl: I, I'm sorry...I, I... I was just....
James: Eh... I guess you've got some issues with surprises, huh?
Do you know where Silent Hill is? I'm kind of...
James: Yeah, that's sooooo not creepy. Is this the right way, spooky
*James raises his left arm and points*
Girl: Um yeah... It's hard to see with this fog, but there's only the
one road. You can't miss it.
*Kiddish music starts up and Angela starts to sing but is abruptly stopped.*
Girl: Anyways, I think you'd better stay away. This uh... this town...
there's something... 'wrong' with it. It's kind of hard to explain, but...
James: Is the strip club still there? Is it dangerous?
Girl: Maybe... And it's not just the strippers either... It's...
SH2 rewrite-James meets Maria
*James makes his way further into Rosewater Park until he reaches an area
that looks out onto the water (or what used to be the water). He sees a woman
looking out at the lake and makes his way towards her.*
*The woman turns around and smiles at James*
James: No... you're not.
Maria: Do I look like your girlfriend?
James: No... But you do look like a prostitute.
Maria: My name... is Maria. I don't look like a ghost. Do I? See? Feel how warm I am.
*Maria then takes James' right hand and places it on her chest. James backs away and pulls his hand away from Maria.*
James: Wow, usually I need to go on a couple dates at Taco Bell or something before I get to cop a feel.
Maria: It's ok. You remind me of someone I know too.
James: Oh, right... Sorry, I'm just confused in a confusing town filled with confusing people, that want to kill me...
*James begins to walk away from Maria in the direction he just came from.*
Maria: Where are you going?
James: I'm looking for Mary. She's my
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